The Brave Scotsman ~ a short story

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The Brave Scotsman

The sun was shining and not a cloud in the cool autumn sky as Hamish MacGinnis took his yearly walk to the old cemetery at the edge of the village. His steps were slow and no longer full of confidence. Every year rain or shine for the past 70 years he paid homage to the Memorial that sat in the middle of old worn headstones and tall weeds in the long forgotten cemetery.

He remembered the day he marched off in 1915 to fight in a war that was to end all wars. The flag of Scotland held high and songs of victory filled the air as the train pulled away.

As he neared the old battered train station, a train sounded in the distance. Old man MacGinnis was transported back to that day in 1915 when he boarded a train to an unknown future.

Flags were waving and crowds were cheering as the regiment boarded the train. Hamish held his Annie tight as her tears fell among the platform.

With shoulders bent and thoughts of Annie’s last embrace, Hamish went back inside where men were playing cards, laughing and joking about anything but what lay ahead of them.

Little Bobby MacTavish was the first of many to fall.

He remembered that day when he was marching with Bobby talking about home both laughing at the memories of boyhood shenanigans. Out of nowhere a bullet came and Bobby fell.

Gun fire erupted from both sides and then all was silent. The eerie stillness sunk deep into the souls of the men. Silence. A word they all yearned for yet feared. Hamish laid Bobby to rest on a muddy field, with a faded old ribbon attached to the picture of young woman who will be left to mourn the memory of a lost love.

Men came and went, killed in unknown valleys and farmlands, a long line of young men he was afraid to know yet would always remember the men who will forever lay in unmarked graves and on muddy fields.

Three years later he came home to the bands playing, men from other wars shaking his hand, young boys asking to see his medals and pretty young girls ready to offer up forbidden kisses.

A hero had returned home as a young woman waited, holding her breath until she held him in her arms and tears once again fell on the platform.

A hero, no longer a boy but a changed man who survived hell to come home to an unknown world, nothing seemed familiar yet everything was the same.

A hero, to be remembered for that fateful afternoon in a faraway village…

As the last of his childhood friends died on a cold winter night in 1917 – Hamish felt as if a bullet found the depths of his soul where darkness and hardness had now taken root. He fought and killed as if he were possessed by evil himself.

In the fall of 1918 they came upon what was left of a Belgium village. Only one building was left standing. As Hamish drew near he noticed a movement in a curtain, he signaled for his men to stop. Moving ever so slowly towards the building – a church, he steadied his rifle when a little head stared back at him. A child. Then another child stood up and looked out the window, then another in a doorway. The child in the doorway saw him and came forward – displaying the beauty of innocence, as he was reminded of another time in another life when innocence shone in the beauty of his love.

In that moment he saw the flash, heard the mortar as it found its target beyond the church. Hamish felt a stirring in his heart and called out to his men to save the children. Grabbing the child he ran towards the building. Risking their lives they found a child’s refuge in a battle-scarred church. The men held their ground while fighting erupted all around them. Mortars fell short and bullets missed their mark as men from the Kings Army protected dozens of children in an abandoned church.

As the battle came to a close and the Germans retreated, Hamish and his men left the church and was surprised at the destruction all around them but the church was left unharmed. A little girl reached out and put her hand in his, and as she smiled up at him  it was there that Hamish found the shattered pieces of his soul he thought long destroyed.

Dozens of lives were saved that afternoon. They were lives that grew up to become men and women who would also reach out to a new generation of innocence, protecting Jewish children from the storms of another war in a safe refuge of an old battle-scarred church.

He entered the cemetery with the memory of that day filling his heart and remembering that little girl whom many say he was a hero for saving. But it was that little girl who saved him when she reached for his hand.

Laying his poppies down at the memorial, he heard the voices once again from the past, all calling out to him. Then he saw his Annie, also reaching out to him telling him it is time to come home.

A warm Voice called out, “welcome home my brave Scotsman” and as Hamish looked up he saw a brilliance he could not explain and the Voice called out “well done faithful servant”. Soon he was surrounded by the thousands of souls that were saved because of one man’s heroism to save the beauty of innocence in a world gone mad.

In the midst of all those souls, one hand reached out….

Patty B.  August 2014
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35 Responses to The Brave Scotsman ~ a short story

  1. LubbyGirl says:

    This is beautiful. Are you the author?

    • Patty B says:

      Yes, I confess I wrote it. I actually re-wrote three times, the second time it was turning into a book so I had to shorten it. I am glad you liked it.

  2. russtowne says:

    I love this story, Patty. I was considering compiling another fiction short story anthology and your story inspired me to make it happen. Please email me at russtowne@yahoo.com to let me know whether you’d like to learn more about this project.
    Russ

    • Patty B says:

      wow, thank you. I will be emailing you.

      • Patty I don’t know if you know Russ but he is really nice and has published several books, some children’s, some non-fiction and fiction and poetry….. just thought I’d mention that to you… Diane

      • Patty B says:

        Oh yes I did, thank you…I have been following him for over a year. I enjoy his work very much which is why I am so honored that he asked me. And I highly recommend him to anyone who wants to check out his blog.

      • I submitted 3 poems that he used in one of his Anthologies and 1 to be published non-fiction…

        This story of yours for sure is very special for his next one… Diane

  3. Brought a tear to my eye – a beautiful story Patty. ❤
    Diana xo

  4. Oh Patty…..the tears just started. Thank you for writing this and sharing this. SO beautifully done!

  5. Patty, this is such a beautiful story ….how many men experienced this or similar to it…Diane

  6. This is such a GREAT story. Gave me chills!

  7. Such a heart warming Story Patty, you are very gifted and your expression with words comes from your gentle, Loving heart, Thank you for sharing it with us.

    My Mum use to call me Annie when she was alive and some of my friends still do and as I read your Story, I thought, I’m waiting for my Hero to come home too.

    Christian Love – Annie

    • Patty B says:

      How touching that you can put yourself into Annie, his waiting love – Annie has always had a bit of the Scottish ring to it! One of my favorite names. 🙂 You made my day with your comment. Thank you!!

      • As you know Patty I was Adopted and so have no personal knowledge of my Ancestry, apart from the fact that my Birth Mother came from England although where I don’t know, or it could have even been Scotland etc I don’t know, which means I could even be a Princess ??? seriously though, the name Anne comes from the Hebrew Name Hannah and so does Annie , Anna and others and they mean Grace.

        My half Sister said that on our fathers side we come from the line of China Morrison but this has never been proven either way.

        Whats in a Name … God knows us by Name … Whats in a Name… A person of worth in His eyes and yes as woman of God we are all Princesses.

        Blessings – Anne.

      • Patty B says:

        As you stated you and all of us are a princess! 🙂 We will just have to start calling you Princess Anne!! What joy knowing that God knows us by name and the number of hair on our heads!

  8. crystal sponenberg says:

    patty, i wish i had the talent as you do, i know i wrote my one manifest of poetry , but i have never managed any more, it’s like after that one period in my yrs no more will find its way to my brain, i love this short story and all the stories you have written, they come from not only your head but your true presance , you heart felt feelings placed into word written down for all to read

    • Patty B says:

      Thank you Crystal, it means a lot to me what you wrote. I hope you can go back to your writing again, you have a full plate that is for sure. By writing you may find the strength you need and help others going through what you are going through right now. When you get a break, think about it. WordPress is free and a great resource for writers and support.

  9. Glad to see that you’re sharing your stories, Patty. Keep it up!

  10. Sheryl says:

    The story is wonderful. It’s fun to read one of your stories.

  11. Patty – Your story has relevance not only on wars gone by but for our soldiers coming home today. The battered souls hanging with the question of why. The souls believing their work meant nothing and yet they gave so much. Great work. Sheri

    • Patty B says:

      Thank you Sheri, My thoughts of writing of this. I often think of my son and how he worked with an organization to bring shoes to the Afghan people while he was there. Ask him about it today and he shyly says it was no big deal – but to someone who has no shoes it most likely made the difference between able to get to work to feed a family to allowing a child to walk to school.

  12. Patty, this is so beautifully touching. I love how you wove in the hope we have because of the perfect One who reached out to us.

    Blessings ~ Wendy ❀

  13. bjsscribbles says:

    I found your blog through Anne and enjoyed reading your story. I am glad I found your link so decided to follow

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